求帮忙写一篇虚拟语气英语作文

“如果我是一个百万富翁,我将捐出一半的钱,也许很多人会用它来买一幢大房子,或是周游各地……而我,将会用它们捐一所学校。多一所学校,我们就可以让更多的孩子去上学,学习更多的知识。将成为祖国的栋梁。”这是中文按这个来写,可以适当加,加了的话麻烦翻译一下下

If i were a millionaire, i would donate half of my money.Maybe a number of people would spend their money travelling around the world or on big houses. But for me, i would rather sponsor the establishment of a school. More desirable children could afford to go to school and learn more with schools building up.Thus, more children would grow up to be the mainstays of our country.
时间有点紧,写得比较倡促。用词没有仔细斟酌,确保正确为主。虚拟语气应该没错。
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第1个回答  2013-09-07
If I have a millions dollers,I would donate half of money to the children hospital to let the children healthy。Many people would ues the money to buy a big house or travel around here and there....So far as I am concerned (至于我),I will ues the money to set up a school.We can let more and more students go to school so they can learn more knowledge and have a good future。When the children grow up ,they can help our country。

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第2个回答  2013-09-07
If I were a millionaire, I would donate half of my money. Maybe many people can use that money to buy big hourses or travel around the world. But I will use that money to build a school. With one more school, we can let more children to go to school. The children would learn more knowledge at school. They would then grow up to be the backbone of the country.

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