翻译:如果有幸被贵校录取，我将在今后的四年里更加努力地学习。

Answer 1

如果有幸被贵校录取，我将在今后的四年里更加努力地学习。
If you are lucky enough to be admitted to your school, I will study harder in the next four years.

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Answer 2

If I have the honor to be admitted to your school, I will study even harder in the coming four years.