创作思路:
确定中心,写出深意。我们要着于挖掘所写事件中含有的生活哲理或找出它闪光的地方,反复思考,确定文章的中心思想。即善于从普通的小事中写出深意来。
文章的六要素要交待清楚。一件事情的发生,离不开时间、地点、人物、事情的起因、经过和结果这六方面,即常说的“六要素”,只有交待清楚这几方面,才能使读者对所叙述的事,有个清楚、全面的了解。
作文:
China is my motherland. It lies in the eat of Asia. Beijing is the capital of China.
China's population is more than 1.3 billion. The population in the east is much bigger than。
in the west. The weather in China is wetter and warmer in the south and drier and colder in the north.
China has a long history, and there are a lot of places of interest in China, such as the Great
Wall, the Summer Palace, the West Lake and so on.
In the last twenty years, great changes have taken place in my motherland. I am sure
China's tomorrow will be much better. I love China!
【参考译文】
中国是我的祖国,它位于亚洲的东部。北京是中国的首都。
中国有13亿多人口,东部的人口比西部的多得多。中国的天气情况是:南部潮湿、温暖;北部干旱、寒冷。
中国具有悠久的历史,这里有许多名胜,如长城、颐和园、西湖等。
近二十年来,我的祖国发生了巨变。我相信中国的明天会更美好。我爱中国!
思路:
先确定写哪个国家,然后写出喜欢这个国家的原因,列举这个国家的几点特质。
范文如下:
My favorite country -- Holland
[name] the kingdom of Holland,known as Holland
the Republic of Holland known as the "Kingdom of Holland","Holland" is called the Netherlands in the German language,which means "low country",the kingdom of Holland is one of the biggest province,so the ancient China said,"Holland",the name has been in use ever since.
is the national emblem of orange Nassau Royal Wang hui.As the mantle.
There is a coat of arms with the top of the crown in a cloak,wearing a trefoilshaped crown lion Blue Shield,a claw hold silver Rome sword,a claw and a bundle of arrows,a symbol of unity is strength.
Above the shield has a crown,on each side of a lion,the blue sash reads William's motto "unremittingly".
译文:
我最喜欢的国家——荷兰
[名字]荷兰王国,被称为荷兰
荷兰共和国被称为“荷兰王国”,“荷兰”在德语中被称为荷兰,意思是“低地国家”,荷兰王国是荷兰最大的省份之一,所以中国古代有“荷兰”之称,这个名字一直沿用至今。
国徽是橘红色的拿骚皇家王回族这个曼特。那里是一件披着斗篷的斗篷,头戴三叶形皇冠的狮子蓝色盾牌,一把爪持银罗马剑,一只爪子和一束箭,象征着团结力量。以上盾牌有一个王冠,在狮子的两边,蓝色的腰带上写着威廉的“坚持不懈”的座右铭。
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