英文面试自我介绍急

Question

大家好，我叫XXX 今年23 很荣幸能参加贵公司的面试也感谢贵公司给我这个机会，我之前从事过两份工作，最近的一次是09年3月到11年2月。我以实习生任职一名销售员。转为正式员工需要三个月，而我一个月后就成为了正式员工。在这期间接触了形形色色的成功人士。在工作上能和不同性格的人融洽相处并与同事建立深厚的友谊！我的优点是细心谨慎。我很认同贵公司一贯至精至美的宗旨。在我看来贵公司每一件产品都是工艺精湛的艺术品。所以能到高档， 高质原则的贵公司工作是十分荣幸的事！谢谢。

有英文面试经验的朋友能不能给我分享指导一下还有什么不足。谢谢~

Answer 1

Hello everybody, my name is XXX is proud to participate in this year's 23 interviews also like to thank you for giving me this opportunity to your company, I worked two jobs before, most recently in March 2009 to 11 years in February. I worked as a sales trainee staff. FTE needs for three months, a month after I became a full-time employees. During this period, access to all sorts of successful people. At work and the different personalities can get along and build strong friendships with colleagues! My advantage is that careful cautious. I agree to the essence of your company to the United States has always been the aim. In my opinion every one of your products are exquisite works of art. They are able to high-end, high-quality principle is very proud of your company to do the work! Thank you.

Answer 2

发现你之前采用的那个朋友的翻译，有些语法和表达不对，我帮忙改了下，你可以参考看看。
O(∩_∩)O~

Good morning ladies and gentlement, my name is XXX. I'm 23 years old now. Thank you for giving me this opportunity and I'm honored to participate in this interview. I‘ve been worked in two different companies before, most recently one is from March 2009 to February 2011. I worked as a sales trainee staff. It would take three months to convert into a formal staff, but I became a full-time employee after a month. During this period, I have access to all sorts of successful people. I got along well with my clients and build strong friendships with my colleagues. My advantage is meticulous. I agree with your company's philosophy about the pursuit of excellence. In my opinion, every product of your company is an exquisite work of art. Therefore, It is very proud for me, if I can work in this high-end, high-quality company. That's all. Thank you.

Answer 3

city .tonglu.Graduated from the Jiangxi Normal University,i love my school for it is wide and pretty,and my major is tuorism management.
During my school life,i spend a lot of time in my major,now i've acquired the National Guide Certification,
theoretically and practically i made a general acquitance in managing tourism.Besides,i took active apart in the school activity in order to improve my social skills.
i like reading for that increase my knowledge and improve my quality.i like playing badminton as well,it can not only exercise the body but also make many friends.

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