用英语为朋友李明给一家外企负责人brown写一封推荐信。我写了一个草稿，求英文大神帮忙修改，在我写

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用英语为朋友李明给一家外企负责人brown写一封推荐信。我写了一个草稿，求英文大神帮忙修改，在我写的这个的基础上修改。

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楼主，觉得你这样写，有点中式色彩哦，从别处之前看过点范文，给你改改，你看看怎么样。

Dear Brown（你换下姓吧，除非你和他很熟，建议你用MR XXX）,
It is with great pleasure that I recommend to you my friend Li Ming, an outstanding graduate majoring in Computer Software.
I am Liming's best friend since he was a freshmen in the college, so I know him very well.He is courteous, sincere and hardworking who always got the first prize scholarship when he was a college student and finally won the Excellent graduate.
I believe Mr. Li’s education and character undoubtedly qualify him to serve for your company. I recommend him without reservation and believe you will find him a helpful and responsible staff member.
　　
　　Sincerely yours,
Li Hua